Penelope Cross

As much as I don't like these kinds of rhyming poems, I have to say this surprised me. When I started reading I kind of thought this wouldn't be good, ...

Yeah, I'm loving TrueBlood and wanted to write a Fanfic as well for it, I'm actually thinking of buying up just to host it. Buuuut, Charlaine Harris gets pretty pissy ...

So, um, not really feeling this. It's good and has a good concept, but it could be better, a lot better. The world is an oyster I am the pearl ...

Life And Love The first two lines are nice, but the third line doesn't seem to fit that well though. I feel like it's just kinda thrown in there, I ...

A little gas and I was moving down the buzzing street again. The Loop, always busy, always moving - alive. The Loop was the cultural hub for the city. All ...

I happened to copy and paste this, and it was an older version of the poem, it's supposed to be hands instead of feet. This means the Last Rites, but ...

As they lay her down In a bed of wildflowers And tickled her hands holy, A grandson disobeyed her bequeath And draped her with a rosary. His frozen tears fell ...

First off, this is a great poem, I love the imagery, it really made me feel like (1 Spring is a little girl and (2 you tend to get a ...

That solitary good-bye from those who we pre-mourn... Does but little to comfort the grieving soul. The opening stanza feels a little weak. And to be honest, it kind of ...

She has scars on her wrists that slowely heal, but every time they heal she reopens them. The first line makes me not like this poem automatically, to be honest. ...

Aware of the situation, aware of the wingless creation, as all greedily descend, to give life a dramatic end, Given the title of the topic is WWII, starting off with ...

My first work posted here, and quite possibly one of my favorites. Meticulously, I scribbled down the words Of an epigram that had been Sitting in the back of my ...

Well, this poem isn’t bad, but you need to brush it up a bit. Also, my suggestions, if you’re going to rhyme, I’d really put a lot of effort into ...

I really don't think this is too great of a poem. To be honest, it feels like two or three different poems that have been spliced together roughly. Some stanza's ...

I went back a few pages and couldn't find a specific thread for the show...so.. Anyone a fan? I've been watching all through Season One and am stoked for the ...